First read
Only had two stanzas.
Read like you were clearing your mind
of all distractions.
Then, third stanza,
Distractions coming in.
Your mind starts saying things,
reminding yourself that you need
some false teeth.
Fourth and fifth stanzas
Begin looking for outside comforts.
Outside on the balcony,
looking down at the pedestrians,
their comforts,
fancy clothes.
It becomes overwhelming.
Sixth stanza
Either daydreaming
or actually sleeping in the sun,
escaping into yourself,
into your solitude,
into meditation.
Seventh stanza,
tone changes.
It is shorter,
Snappier rhythm
Sharper rhyme.
It is almost
as if someone else is speaking.
I feel the next stanzas
are different dreams.
One of them is a sexy dream.
Supported by the blue zone thing
Saying through your dreams
you are living
many, many lives.
In the twelfth,
you dream of an art gallery
In the thirteenth stanza
you mention your original ink,
probably your tattoo.
The fourteenth
Reference to the pirate thing
I wrote for you.
I guess you climb up
and play for a while,
Back to your place
your new apartment,
which is your imagination,
or your dreams,
Like getting a glimpse
inside of your brain
Many different ideas,
dreams, hopes,
and annoyances
floating around.
It was a very nice read.
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