segunda-feira, 4 de fevereiro de 2013

Sunny outlook

Sunny outlook(complex rhyme scheme/syllable count)

Sunny lanes of hopeful, real in a dream
I searched for something, in light of my sleep
Stalls busy glaring out into the street
Social interation not what it seems

The lanes were sunlit, concrete walls all cream
Who knew choosing lunch snacks could be so deep-
tongue of your mind tastes fillings in the heat,
is this the right shop? across the road gleams
Buy beauty in kilos, illusion´s steam
There´s attraction! Though in this store you keep

Life is short life is bought
not often meaning´s sought

Cruel light of early afternoon is seen
A customer´s mind defines the word cheap
The elderly search comfortable seats-
where they can lump youth into kind and mean

Idleness wallows like a child so keen-
From the calm flat alleys up to the steep
Open establishments as firm as cow teets
Plaster, stone and paint not a tree of green
Shops have become summer clothes and bedsheets-
where homeless sleep and dirty bodies lean

Life distorts within thoughts
Lost in "shoulds" Killed in "oughts"

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